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  • The Shield of Achilles

    With all the talk of the new movie, The Odyssey, it seemed a good time to reprint one of my favorite poems.

    W. H. Auden

    1907 –1973

        She looked over his shoulder
           For vines and olive trees,
        Marble well-governed cities
           And ships upon untamed seas,
        But there on the shining metal
           His hands had put instead
        An artificial wilderness
           And a sky like lead.

    A plain without a feature, bare and brown,
       No blade of grass, no sign of neighborhood,
    Nothing to eat and nowhere to sit down,
       Yet, congregated on its blankness, stood
       An unintelligible multitude,
    A million eyes, a million boots in line,
    Without expression, waiting for a sign.

    Out of the air a voice without a face
       Proved by statistics that some cause was just
    In tones as dry and level as the place:
       No one was cheered and nothing was discussed;
       Column by column in a cloud of dust
    They marched away enduring a belief
    Whose logic brought them, somewhere else, to grief.

        She looked over his shoulder
           For ritual pieties,
        White flower-garlanded heifers,
           Libation and sacrifice,
        But there on the shining metal
           Where the altar should have been,
        She saw by his flickering forge-light
           Quite another scene.

    Barbed wire enclosed an arbitrary spot
       Where bored officials lounged (one cracked a joke)
    And sentries sweated for the day was hot:
       A crowd of ordinary decent folk
       Watched from without and neither moved nor spoke
    As three pale figures were led forth and bound
    To three posts driven upright in the ground.

    The mass and majesty of this world, all
       That carries weight and always weighs the same
    Lay in the hands of others; they were small
       And could not hope for help and no help came:
       What their foes liked to do was done, their shame
    Was all the worst could wish; they lost their pride
    And died as men before their bodies died.

        She looked over his shoulder
           For athletes at their games,
        Men and women in a dance
           Moving their sweet limbs
        Quick, quick, to music,
           But there on the shining shield
        His hands had set no dancing-floor
           But a weed-choked field.

    A ragged urchin, aimless and alone,
       Loitered about that vacancy; a bird
    Flew up to safety from his well-aimed stone:
       That girls are raped, that two boys knife a third,
       Were axioms to him, who’d never heard
    Of any world where promises were kept,
    Or one could weep because another wept.

        The thin-lipped armorer,
           Hephaestos, hobbled away,
        Thetis of the shining breasts
           Cried out in dismay
        At what the god had wrought
           To please her son, the strong
        Iron-hearted man-slaying Achilles
           Who would not live long.

About Me

Retired great grandmother living in Washington. Former radio Public Service Director and National Accounts Manager.

I’m a hair-dishevelled heilan’ coo,
Hamish McKay be ma name;
Welcome tae this dreichet glen
I’m cursed tae ca’ ma hame.
Depending on the mood I’m in
I’ll raise ma horns on high,
An’ if I like the look o’ ye
I’ll likely let ye by.
But should I dinnae like the look
O’ ye, then tak great care,
I’ll raise ma horns on high again,
Go on, get oot o’there!
So whether welcome yae or nae,
I’ll raise these horns sae mean,
Then ye shall ken ma meaning
By the twinkle o’ ma een.

Courtesy of
MARION GRAY Wollaton Road Wollaton Park Nottingham

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